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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #45 on: September 06, 2019, 08:09:35 PM »
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« Reply #46 on: September 16, 2019, 11:49:56 PM »
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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #47 on: September 17, 2019, 01:27:08 AM »
Loving the colours and the retro style, but I think there's quite a few things you could fix. The "Lil Bit Of The Bubble Productions Presents" font choice just does not look good on the piece. The bottom "Warner Bros Presents" text piece is too close to the border and needs to be spaced upwards a bit more. Also the 3 renders faded in above Jericho could've been faded/blended into the piece much better, it just looks like all you did was put it on soft light or something.

The font you chose for Chris Jericho was really really nice. Perhaps the AEW World Champion text could stand out more if it was the pinkish colour? This change I'm not 100% on, but it's something to play around with.
 
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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #48 on: September 17, 2019, 01:33:38 AM »
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This piece has a lot of potential to be something great. It’s really good, but it can be a lot better.

What I like here is the overall theme, the neon. I like the bottom part with the text and I think it looks great, except that there’s two little white bars standing out on one side, yet not on the other?.. but the rest of it is where I have problems.

The title being blue and pink but not Jericho is a flaw I noticed off the bat, and the title also doesn’t fit on Jericho’s hand that well.. maybe it just needs to be smaller.

I also think it looks sort of cluttered with all the renders in the back jumbled together, maybe spread them out or just leave it to one back there. I do like how you’ve blended them, just maybe lower the opacity a tiny bit. Also you need to erase the renders better, as when you zoom in on Jericho’s left arm towards the bottom, you can still see bits and pieces of the renders behind. Also, the stipulation said to feature him as champion, so you really shouldn’t have two non champion renders.

Also a very minor detail but you should move the movie credits up a little bit so it’s not touching the bottom border and is closer to the main text.

And another thing you can change is “Lil” to “A Little” as that was the original quote, but that is probably just me nitpicking.

Otherwise the fonts, colors, border, and blur look very well. Good job.

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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #49 on: September 17, 2019, 08:48:23 PM »
Thanks for the feedback guys. Updated a few things here and there:

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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #50 on: September 21, 2019, 03:35:33 PM »
Thanks for the feedback guys. Updated a few things here and there:

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Unfortunately you’ve messed up the bottom part, as the glow around the text just isn’t working for me. Not sure about the change of the AEW Champion font, but I think it looks fine 🤔

The title still seems to have more color of the blue and pink than Jericho, and you’ve butchered the arm by putting a hand there, as it makes that arm look longer than the other.. maybe just put the title around his waist?

I don’t think you’ve spaced out the renders in the back, but they look much better to me.. maybe it’s just because you’ve blended them better? Idk.

I like the movie credits part, you’ve done better with that.

Still a good piece though, don’t get me wrong.
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« Reply #51 on: September 23, 2019, 09:18:13 PM »
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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #52 on: September 24, 2019, 02:06:51 PM »
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First off, the manipulation in this piece is fantastic. It actually looks as if they’re standing, and that Seth is actually wearing the championship. The lantern’s manipulation is good, but I think it could be better if you put the tree branch through the handle.

I like the smoke effect. The one in the front bottom right is great, but the smoke over Wyatt is where I have the problem. The smoke is all around him, and on him, except his right foot and the ground below it?

I’m having mixed feelings about the Hell In A Cell logo being on the ground. I think it should be skewed up a little bit, but I like the shadow. Onto that, I think the shadow of Rollins goes out too far, it shouldn’t be on Wyatt.
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« Reply #53 on: September 25, 2019, 08:43:58 PM »
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First off, the manipulation in this piece is fantastic. It actually looks as if they’re standing, and that Seth is actually wearing the championship. The lantern’s manipulation is good, but I think it could be better if you put the tree branch through the handle.

I like the smoke effect. The one in the front bottom right is great, but the smoke over Wyatt is where I have the problem. The smoke is all around him, and on him, except his right foot and the ground below it?

I’m having mixed feelings about the Hell In A Cell logo being on the ground. I think it should be skewed up a little bit, but I like the shadow. Onto that, I think the shadow of Rollins goes out too far, it shouldn’t be on Wyatt.

Worked on the few things that were mentioned, hope its for the better:
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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #54 on: October 04, 2019, 09:52:00 AM »
Entry For GraphicSlam

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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #55 on: October 08, 2019, 11:54:04 PM »
Entry for Revolution 4#-

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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #56 on: October 10, 2019, 10:14:45 PM »
Entry for Revolution 4# Battle Royal-

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« Reply #57 on: October 21, 2019, 10:20:10 PM »
Entry for Revolution 5#-

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Re: Soul Rider GFX Showcase
« Reply #58 on: November 02, 2019, 12:02:59 PM »
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